Hi, In are Hurumanu we read a text, the text was called Poi.
When we read something, it's remind us the things the we did when were going somewhere and something that you did. The text is good thing to read or listen to the text.
Mr Mitchell said that, the teacher is a little bit mean, cause her teacher said her to the office without a reason.
I think that to for a sec but when I almost finish the text I read the text that Mai teacher and her, they apology to each other.
When Mai went to the office, Mr Hayward, the principal of the school tell to Mai to help Ms Taiapa.
Mai don't mind helping Ms Taiapa because she is in the art room. Mai liked the room in their, their are a lot of cool things the she saw. Ms Taiapa and Mai make a poi, Mai has a lot of Ideas what materials to use on poi. Mai think of two colour to use on poi, and those colour are blue and red, but they need a blue and red plastic so they have a plan to get those materials. They make all of the student to bring a blue and red plastic, and they also made some blue and red plastics.
Hello Fernando. It's me Michael. I liked the way you wrote a summary of the whole book, that must've took a long time. Next time you could fix some spelling mistakes like (Hi in [are] which should be (our)(In the introduction.) What was your favourite part about doing this blog?
ReplyDeleteHey Fernando, this is absouloutely fantastic! I really like that you writed more paragraphs and the details and all of what happened, but you need to improve your grammar if you want this to make it more good.
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